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beachlassStory Post *insert gasp of surprise here*
I'm honestly not real pleased with this piece, but also not sure how much I'm interested in tweaking it any more. Concrit would be more than usually welcome.
Continues from "Hot Soup", a drabble written for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
nezumiko in January
After Dinner
Genma/Kakashi
Rating: Hard R
After training with Sasuke, and worrying about him, and worrying about how serious that Gaara kid was about a death match… Kakashi was glad to be home. Clean and warm and safe and fed.. all good things, and even better, Genma with him, Genma’s eyes on him, and Genma beginning to flush. Kakashi put down his bowl and grinned back. “Stay the night?” he offered.
In Kakashi’s bedroom Genma quietly divested himself of another layer of weapons – the kind that stayed on under clothes unless you were with a really trusted lover. Kakashi watched as Genma laid aside sets of senbon, packages of poison, heat crawling up his belly as Genma stripped his defences down, a nakedness more vulnerable than skin. Finally Genma sprawled on the futon beside Kakashi, cupped his face and drew him in for a kiss.
Kakashi felt Genma’s lips against his own, felt Genma’s strong fingers lightly stroke against his face. Kakashi groaned and pressed himself eagerly against Genma. He wrapped one arm around Genma’s waist, sliding his hand under Genma’s shirt. Genma’s tongue thrust into Kakashi’s mouth, making Kakashi moan again.
Soon Kakashi was on his back, Genma on top of him, kissing harder, tongue and hips slowly thrusting together. Kakashi was responding eagerly, mouth open, legs tangled with Genma’s, one hand stroking Genma’s strong back, the other rubbing his ass. Genma broke off kissing for a moment, to look down at Kakashi, grey hair tousled against the bedsheets, lips wet and breath panting. Genma thrust against Kakashi, and watched as the other man’s eyes screwed shut. He thrust again, hard and promising, like distant thunder promising rain. When Kakashi was biting his lip, and pulling Genma’s hips against him, fingers digging into muscle, Genma lowered his face to Kakashi’s neck. Kakashi shuddered as Genma declared “Think I’m gonna suck your cock for a bit and then fuck you into the mattress until you come.” At the words Kakashi’s back arched hard, and Genma grinned, continuing, “You’re gonna take me, aren’t you ‘Kashi? Gonna let me loosen you up and fuck that pretty ass of yours, hn?” Kakashi groaned, a deep and helpless noise, and then eyes still closed, Kakashi started to pull Genma’s shirt over his head and off.
Skin to skin contact was all good, and once Genma’s shirt was off, he paused only to encourage Kakashi’s undershirt to the floor before allowing himself to be rolled onto his back.
Eagerly Kakashi licked at Genma’s nipple… first the left, tonguing a faded scar, and then the other. He licked them wetly , and then blew against them until they were cool and hard, while Genma shifted appreciatively under him. Then Kakashi dragged his teeth across one nipple and down, mouthing at Genma’s stomach, and teasing at the hem of Genma’s pants. Genma’s hands were stroking Kakashi, from his hair to his shoulders and back up again.
Soon they were naked, strong legs tangled together. Genma moved against Kakashi in a slow steady rhythm, covering him, breath hot against the back of Kakashi’s neck. They rocked together as the room grew dark in the evening light.
I'm honestly not real pleased with this piece, but also not sure how much I'm interested in tweaking it any more. Concrit would be more than usually welcome.
Continues from "Hot Soup", a drabble written for
nezumiko in JanuaryAfter Dinner
Genma/Kakashi
Rating: Hard R
After training with Sasuke, and worrying about him, and worrying about how serious that Gaara kid was about a death match… Kakashi was glad to be home. Clean and warm and safe and fed.. all good things, and even better, Genma with him, Genma’s eyes on him, and Genma beginning to flush. Kakashi put down his bowl and grinned back. “Stay the night?” he offered.
In Kakashi’s bedroom Genma quietly divested himself of another layer of weapons – the kind that stayed on under clothes unless you were with a really trusted lover. Kakashi watched as Genma laid aside sets of senbon, packages of poison, heat crawling up his belly as Genma stripped his defences down, a nakedness more vulnerable than skin. Finally Genma sprawled on the futon beside Kakashi, cupped his face and drew him in for a kiss.
Kakashi felt Genma’s lips against his own, felt Genma’s strong fingers lightly stroke against his face. Kakashi groaned and pressed himself eagerly against Genma. He wrapped one arm around Genma’s waist, sliding his hand under Genma’s shirt. Genma’s tongue thrust into Kakashi’s mouth, making Kakashi moan again.
Soon Kakashi was on his back, Genma on top of him, kissing harder, tongue and hips slowly thrusting together. Kakashi was responding eagerly, mouth open, legs tangled with Genma’s, one hand stroking Genma’s strong back, the other rubbing his ass. Genma broke off kissing for a moment, to look down at Kakashi, grey hair tousled against the bedsheets, lips wet and breath panting. Genma thrust against Kakashi, and watched as the other man’s eyes screwed shut. He thrust again, hard and promising, like distant thunder promising rain. When Kakashi was biting his lip, and pulling Genma’s hips against him, fingers digging into muscle, Genma lowered his face to Kakashi’s neck. Kakashi shuddered as Genma declared “Think I’m gonna suck your cock for a bit and then fuck you into the mattress until you come.” At the words Kakashi’s back arched hard, and Genma grinned, continuing, “You’re gonna take me, aren’t you ‘Kashi? Gonna let me loosen you up and fuck that pretty ass of yours, hn?” Kakashi groaned, a deep and helpless noise, and then eyes still closed, Kakashi started to pull Genma’s shirt over his head and off.
Skin to skin contact was all good, and once Genma’s shirt was off, he paused only to encourage Kakashi’s undershirt to the floor before allowing himself to be rolled onto his back.
Eagerly Kakashi licked at Genma’s nipple… first the left, tonguing a faded scar, and then the other. He licked them wetly , and then blew against them until they were cool and hard, while Genma shifted appreciatively under him. Then Kakashi dragged his teeth across one nipple and down, mouthing at Genma’s stomach, and teasing at the hem of Genma’s pants. Genma’s hands were stroking Kakashi, from his hair to his shoulders and back up again.
Soon they were naked, strong legs tangled together. Genma moved against Kakashi in a slow steady rhythm, covering him, breath hot against the back of Kakashi’s neck. They rocked together as the room grew dark in the evening light.
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Date: 2007-04-18 01:18 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2007-04-18 02:28 pm (UTC)Ooooh....ibiki iconnage. AND, you pimped me! You've made me very happy today =DDD
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Date: 2007-04-18 02:00 am (UTC)this was really lovely :) smexy goodness all the way!!
"Genma quietly divested himself of another layer of weapons – the kind that stayed on under clothes unless you were with a really trusted lover. Kakashi watched as Genma...stripped his defences down, a nakedness more vulnerable than skin." hands down probably my fav line! it's very indicative of life as ninja me thinks.
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Date: 2007-04-18 02:47 am (UTC)Thanks! - And you have to go read
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Date: 2007-04-18 03:12 am (UTC)and omg, kiba!!! how do you know all the cool, awesome writers? *jealous*
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Date: 2007-04-20 01:41 am (UTC)I was inspired by one of
Also - do you remember a story a while back where Kakashi is the leader of Itachi's first ANBU mission? I can't find it, or remember who wrote it.
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Date: 2007-04-20 02:19 am (UTC)This (http://community.livejournal.com/des_solace/3748.html#cutid1) is the only one I've read where Kakashi and Itachi were in ANBU together. Don't know if it's the one you're looking for or not. ^^
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